Well my other vid went to shit after youtube got rid of the high quality option for no reason. Well went ahead and made a new one. Easy Target, I went ahead and followed your advise for the vid so hope you like it son.
best to watch it from youtube and choose the high quality option as youtube likes to degrade vids even more when you watch from forums etc.

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ca1SIZXLLho[/youtube]